単元：
#英検・TOEIC・IELTS・TOEFL・IELTS等#英検#英検1級#英検2級
指導講師：
英語ファイル / eigophile
問題文全文(内容文)：
英文を書く際のポイントについてです。英検2級と1級でそれぞれ問題文を添削しています。
添削前：Women in the US did not have the right to vote until 1920.
添削後：Women in the US did not have suffrage until 1920.
添削前：By investing in energy sources that will never run out, countries can reduce the total amount of greenhouse gases they produce.
添削後：By investing in renewable energy, countries can reduce their carbon footprint.
添削前：The difference in income between rich people and poor people is widening, and many people are earning less than enough money to live a decent life.
添削後：Income disparity is widening, and many people are living below the poverty line.
添削前：The chance that a criminal under the age of 18 will commit a crime again is quite high.
添削後：The recidivism rate among juvenile delinquents is quite high.
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