英語ファイル / eigophile
添削前：Women in the US did not have the right to vote until 1920.
添削後：Women in the US did not have suffrage until 1920.
添削前：By investing in energy sources that will never run out, countries can reduce the total amount of greenhouse gases they produce.
添削後：By investing in renewable energy, countries can reduce their carbon footprint.
添削前：The difference in income between rich people and poor people is widening, and many people are earning less than enough money to live a decent life.
添削後：Income disparity is widening, and many people are living below the poverty line.
添削前：The chance that a criminal under the age of 18 will commit a crime again is quite high.
添削後：The recidivism rate among juvenile delinquents is quite high.