問題文全文(内容文)：
英作文で毎回テンプレートを使う！という人はいませんか？

テンプレートに頼りすぎてはいけない理由を語ります。

問題文全文(内容文)：
用意された英文を、森田鉄也先生が添削します。

果たして間違いを見つけられますか？
Q： Do you prefer going on a school trip by bus or by train?
I prefer going on a school trip by train. I once had an experience that I went on a school trip to Kyoto by bus. We got caught a traffic jam, and we arrived in Kyoto much later than we had planned. Also most of students were very tired and could not enjoy the trip.

問題文全文(内容文)：
IELTSの参考書に載っている、英作文に対しての試験官のコメントを紹介します！

実際の解答例をもとに、気を付けるべき点を確認しましょう！

問題文全文(内容文)：
次の [26]～[30]の英文を完成させるように、[ 　 ]内の①～⑦を並べかえ、その7つの中で4番目にくる語句の番号を選びなさい。
＊の付いた語には [Notes]があります。(日本大学)

[Notes]
airway 「気道」
casualty 「負傷者」
resuscitation 「蘇生(術)」

Quick and correct action in a medical emergency can save lives.
However, most people do not have medical training, and the assistance
[ 26 ][①is called ②is limited ③can ④give ⑤they ⑥to ⑦what]
first aid. This consists of five stages: Safety, Response, Airway*,
Breathing, and Circulation.

The three aims of first aid are to preserve life, prevent further injury
and promote recovery. As soon as an emergency occurs, the safety of
others must be ensured. Also, the scene of the accident must be
surveyed for anything dangerous. This may include oncoming traffic,
fire, exposed power lines, or unstable structures. It is a general rule
that casualties [ 27 ][①unless ②it ③not ④moved ⑤be ⑥should
⑦is] absolutely essential, Moving an injured person can cause even
greater injury than the initial accident caused.

After ensuring the safety of the situation, it is important to find out as
much as possible about the casualty's condition by asking him or her
simple questions about how he or she feels, and by looking for signs of
injury. These may be external bleeding, broken limbs, or other physical
indications. This information will determine the next step and [ 28 ][①be
②to ③on ④the ⑤passed ⑥should ⑦appropriate] emergency service.

Treatment of the casualty must await the arrival of the professional
medical team, but in the meantime, the casualty must have clear
airways* in order to breathe properly. We can also [ 29 ][①casualty
②a ③whether ④the ⑤check ⑥heartbeat ⑦has) ] by feeling for the
pulse. If there is no circulation, then resuscitation* should be
attempted by using our hands to compress the chest.

The basic first aid techniques are easy to learn and apply. People can
[ 30 ][①lives ②help ③what ④save ⑤learning ⑥by ⑦to] do in
most accident situations and common medical emergencies such as
heart attacks and choking.

問題文全文(内容文)：
英文の書き換えについて語ります。

具体的な書き換え方を例を用いて紹介します！